Revised Storyboard After More Specific Research

After presenting our intial ideas we could see that there were lots of gaps in our narrative and that our film lacked a real cliffhanger moment, so we returned to the storyboard, added a new element to the drama and fleshed the narrative out a little more:  

The big changes are:

- addition of more potential moments of drama e.g. car crash so audience don't know which is the key one
- addition of shots that make the issue of who dies more ambiguous
- a cliffhanger ending - we don't know who has pulled the trigger
- more shots showing the relationship between the two brothers