On re-watching what the Year 12s saw, my initial thoughts:
Some of the scenes were to long (or appear so without the voice over that is clearly needed).
There needs to be a voice over to bring context to what has happened and what is happening in the trailer itself.
The car crash scene is terrible and needs to be redone with more fluidity to make it seem like it flows and doesn’t stop start with bad continuity.
Too much story told
Comments on audience feedback for our movie
Too much of the story is told, so we need to either get rid of some scenes, for example Miss Devlin (the mother) dying, or cut back on the amount of military shots.
Audience is split as to who is the person dying at the end, which could either be good or bad.
More scenes needed to be added to bring the full depiction of our story across and add pace.
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