2nd Rough Cut

After our audience feedback, we have produced a second rough cut of our piece aiming to address some of the issues:

• We have re-ordered the whole trailer and taken out some shots to make it less clear that the mother dies and that the elder brother dies to keep some tension and to avoid telling too much of the story
• We have shortened all our clips to try to create pace
• We have added a drum beat to keep a sense of movement in the project as we continue to edit
• We have made the end section less chronological and tried to cut to keep pace and tension