On re-watching what the year 12’s saw, my initial thoughts are…
- Less fade to black shots - overkill here!
- Needs inclusion of some much needed sound, e.g. voiceover, gunshot etc…
- Fill in slight gaps on editing between shots
- Include some extra shots to make the storyline more clear
- Don’t tell too much of story – cut out some info
- More pace, feels too long and does not have trailer tone
- Need to take out certain parts of the story as we have included a little too much for the trailer.
- Add in some much needed music and sound effects
- Make it clear which character is which but leave a degree of mystery
- They agree too much story told
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